This is, of course, subjective. But here are the things I didn't like:
- So much focus on Lila. I know lots of people love her, but she's a bit Mary Sue for me.
- Repetitive words and phrases. If Lila has a smile "like a knife" or "sharp smile" one more time . . . Seriously, stop. Find other words and ways to describe things.
- Kell wasn't the character I fell in love with in the first book. I understand that characters change and grow, but he wasn't very likable in this. He's moving in the wrong direction.
- The "Magic Olympics" (or whatever they called it, but that's pretty much what it was). I don't like stories about contests, so this did not interest me at all. Long passages describing battles? I skimmed. Actually, I didn't even skim, I just skipped to the end to see who'd won.
As I mentioned, all subjective. I know many people love this book. But it took me forever to finish because I just couldn't get into it.
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